Saturday, November 26, 2011

Universe is Watching



What would be your dying wish?
I wish to see her smile once again.

Is that all ?
Yes my lord

Amen.
And I saw her smile; the most amazing and the most beautiful thing I have ever seen.

Anything else?
I wish to see her 10 years back on that rainy day. You know when.

And?
I wish to live that moment once more?

Time cannot be reversed. Yet, I could do it.
Amen.





It was raining. She was waiting for her regular taxi pickup. May because of the traffic, he was not there.
I walked towards her.


10 years back.


My heart was racing. I was all wet. I forgot to take my umbrella from my bag.
She saw me and waved. I responded with an odd smile.
Can you share your umbrella? I asked.
Sure. She was all happy. Before she finished.
I added a "forever".
She might have been expecting this because of my odd behaviour for past couple of months.
She smiled.




I was walking towards her.
I was all wet. I forgot to take my umbrella from my bag.
She saw me and waved. I responded with an odd smile.
You are all wet, come and I got some room for you. She said.
I stopped for a second. And politely refused her. I took the umbrella from my bag and unfolded it.

I walked on.




Is that why you wanted to reverse the time?
I smiled.




PS: Trying a new narration style. Hope it didn't suck that much!

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Never,....sucked...
liked .....

BaKfIrE said...

You can tell frankly :P

Bhavya.B said...

Loved it ...

BaKfIrE said...
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BaKfIrE said...

@B - Thanks mate!

Anonymous said...

Full justice to the topic... loved it.

Sometimes we really wish we could turn back time.

BaKfIrE said...

@datsme - Well, I am also happy about it. Thanks!

AaaDee said...

awesome...that was something new..:)

BaKfIrE said...

@AD - That was a challenge from @Datsme. Thanks for commenting.

Anonymous said...

Really good:)

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